Yesterday
The bitterness of this lonely night waiting to see her face
Waiting for her warm embrace
Waiting for her to be back in my arms
Back in my life by my side were she belongs
Pacing by the door looking out the peephole
Triple checking my phone while I’m trying to keep my anxiety under control
Everything reminds me of her
Is it finished?
Lol yes
Maybe you could consider a more powerful ending………….expected more…………
I also expected more from the relationship, to me the relationship was never “finished”. But things don’t always work out or finish the way we would like them to. Sometimes things just don’t make any sense. Kind of sort of what I was aiming for with the poem. In my mind it makes sense lol.